Wow i like it,i think its really good x great flow 5/5

I think its very good gene, love the emotions from it, tis a wonderful piece, as always tis a perfect 5/5!!! keep them coming man, i want to read more!!!

This one is simple yet i enjoy reading it coz it was really nice and sweet. you don't have to say sorry coz it was great. and what i liked the most are these lines:
"...So girl I want to hold your hands,
And embrace you till the break of dawn"

"...That is because you are my life
My reason of existence

The reason why I have to live
Because I was bear to love you girl
And you are destined to be love
I'm here to give what you want"

"..But one thing is just for sure my love
That I Love you till the end of my life"

coz the emotions in this lines are intense. Keep it up!!

Seloso ka pala, chan(ak)? Nyahaha...

SELOSO! SELOSO! SELOSOOOOOOOOOO!

*coughs*

Well, nicely done, nonetheless. :] I guess jealousy is unavoidable in a relationship, is it not? Ehh... anyway... be good and keep smiling. <3

I loved it the emotion and connection true feelings 5/5

O wow.. i know exactly what its like to not know why im love them even more when they are treating me like shit.. you did rlly good at capturing that.. and it was really well written!!
5/5
<3ang

That was really amazing...It had so much emotion...The flow was just flawlesss and the vocab was incredible...

5/5

It shows so much emotion! the flow and words were amazinf!!! it captures u it seems like nice job!!!

This is good. wow. i really liked it.
keep it up.
youre really talented
<3jess