Ashley,
Typically i love yours.
as people may like different thing thow they're the same in ways but theres still that one meaning thats different.
i happen to like your poetry.
its neat how you realate things in life and switch it around.

ily

I thought it was very good
but it seemed more
like a story
or exerpt from
a story
than a poem

but it was still good

there was a good flow
and your wording was
perfect

a well deserved, 5/5

"The sarcasm in your tone is tedious to those around you."
Philly needs to read this poem.
I'm kidding, I loveee youu. (ifhereadsthis)
Anyway. Lol. :]
This poem was very deep..
especially towards the middle.
The flow was good.. and the heart was there.
You are doing wonderful, Ashley.
Tell me the next time you put up a poem.
I would like to have the honor of reading it.
Overall Rating: 5.0/5

I like the title. o.O
A lot.
And the poem.
Your poetry is getting better. Even if I wasnt fond of the form.. the wording was good. And I'm all about the words.

Nicely done, bruv.

x