Comments : Goodnight Moon

  • 16 years ago

    by Archangel

    Well, it's really not a surprise for one of your poems to be this good.
    so descriptive, i'm getting a little scared. i got some creepy silent hill kinda images in my head while reading this.
    still a real keeper emma, just like you :)
    love you heaps
    ~tim

  • 16 years ago

    by Wake

    Her eyes shift and drip,
    Heaven starts to cry,
    As one angel lets go,
    As one angel is left to die.

    Love it ... deeply expressive ..great work
    5/5

    ~Wake~