Aw how sweet x

Wow short but sweet filled with emotion 4/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

Nicely done. Though tersely expressed, it encompassed so much already. On the other hand, I believe you can add more coherent descriptions, in order to augment its concept and enhance the poem itself. Nice one, nonetheless. :)

This is something I can see a man saying before he proposes or something ~ It's beautiful ~

Whom ever will get it is so luck, u seems like a nice guy.