The poem is really unique with a good flow and choice of words. But you have made a minute mistake that is in some parts you have used the pronoun HE to refer to the razor and in other parts SHE as well. So plse stick to one pronoun. Nevertheless its great :)
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Fsams

That was so good. ME and many others can relate to the feeling. 5/5

-Liz-

I liked this poem it relates to a lot of people, keep up the poetry it really good 5/5