So beautiful almost erotic! :D 5/5 FOR SURE! :D!

"seep, weep" << didn't rly like that rhyme.
It was a kind of.. well, it was a cutting poem.
So, I can't fairly say what I want to. Which is why I haven't voted.
It has great emotion, and great meaning.. Just, I'm not quite sure.

It's a good poem, don't get me wrong.
But, everytime someone brings up 'cutting' I tend to think 'clicheclichecliche' but every single emotion is cliche. Lol. So, yeah.

It is alittle cliche but that is nothing to stress about, the wording was excellent, the emotion was easy to pick up, and the imagery was vivid. You did an excellent job on this 5/5

That was relly good

Love it! Very deep and a great write!