This is actually a song i am still writing so its not all done yet but it will be soon hope you all like it please comment on it

Yeah, that sounds like a song! Lol, but it's really good. Keep it up!

Ok this one is almost done i added more stuff verses or lines what ever you want to call it but i think its pretty good! please comment

Good song/poem whatever... keep it up.. oh plz check out some of my poems.. thanx

Angel