This one was beautiful, Ashley.
I couldn't bare to imagine what you feel,
but you did show it through this piece.
The intense depth and emotion ..
just kept me reading on and on.
You did wonderfully with this one..
If Brian were here with you today,
I'm sure he'd be as proud as I am.
Overall Rating: 5.0/5

That was so pretty...I liked it...

5/5.... =)

I miss him!
i love this poem
its really good
made me smile too about the twinkies
and tech decks
=D
I miss him here
I love you Ashley this is such a good poem.
..<3