I think it's cool. A few errors here and there but those can always be fixed. I like how at the end when I find out it's you that the poem almost seems like you were telling yourself things. Awww another person taller than me. :( lol. I shall always be the short blond girl. Or at least that's what people call me when they don't know my name. :) I'll give it a five. It usually isn't my type of poetry but I really enjoyed it. It just made me wonder what it is about this girl that's so important to write about until I found out in the end. I pictured it in my head. Then again what else would I picture it in? My foot? :)