Comments : Baby, That'd Be All Right

  • 16 years ago

    by ABake

    I love this!
    But I also love country music, and I think that the no lfow and ryhme didn't even matter!
    Overall, the whole poem was great!
    5/5
    ((Amber))

  • 16 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    I think the picture it portrayed is pretty good. And I think you focus on rhyme and flow TOO much, so there's no complaint here about that. I think that poetry should be a way to release your feelings, and if that takes bending the rules a little then so be it.
    ~Midnight Sun