Debbie
What a breathtaking Sonnet. Your words of love are stunning.

Your sweet caress my empty arms denied
Longing words fall to silent lonely cries
A poet's verse to quell the ebbing tide
Through lips bereft of whispered breaths and sighs

How I relate to this verse. Touches me heart so deeply.
~CLAP~CLAP~CLAP~
Love Cindy

That's just beautiful....

Deb,

What a beautiful sonnet. loved the word usage. Especially loved this stanza:

"Oh Love! beseech the night's divine intent
One last bequest of morning's perfect smile
Against thy breast a beating heart content
Embracing gentle comfort for a while"

Absolutely breathtaking. The imagery and flow was excellent.

Bravo, dear friend.

Always,
Jeannie

Poem speaks and plays melodies .........
stunningly beautiful.....

I wish i could find words to compliment what you have written.... mmmmmmmmmm

This is amazing. A truly beautiful, sincere and honest love poem. I've tried sonnets before, but yours is just incomparable. I'm at a loss for words. This is by far one of my favourite love poems on the site. Never stop writing. 5/5

` Liz =]

Wow! I was in awe reading this sonnet. It's absolutely beautiful. It was such a stunning success, Miss Debbie. For a moment, I was carried away by your words to another heavenly realm [of thought]. That's how breathtaking and compelling your words are. I hope you keep on writing what you feel and like. All the best and take care. Love, Debbie

What a poems...My pleasure to read this Marvellous sonnet.. yet within Beautiful emotions penned you portrait here, one of beautiful sonnet i have read..... Well done!

"Longing words fall to silent lonely cries
A poet's verse to quell the ebbing tide"

Isn't that special!

What a compicatedly beautiful metaphors!

I didn't mean to put an a in the above comment. I also wanted to add that I love the ending of the piece. Nice way to finish it off!

Perfect, absolutely breathtaking,amazing,
captivating........special beyond words......
as for the ending......well.......

You can find a dream and live it....

As for the poem?
The one that will run on and on.....
Very beautiful....beyond any words

Wow, wonderful poem! Meaningful, too. 5/5

Amazing beauty this poem holds.Very heartfelt and deeply moving descriptions.Great poem .

Best Wishes
chavii.

Debb your poem is flawless. You describe things in such a way the saliva oozes out for a while ;). The word choice is as always outstanding. God bless you dear

Tc
Fsams

You proably already know it.. this is brilliant.. Very amazing.. must say the way you play with words is infatuating..

Very nice. beautiful words. 5/5

I love sonnets,someday I`ve got to try one,this was superb,If I could do half this good I`d be happy. very touching.

I love your writing style its beautiful 5/5

Wonderfull poem 5/5 ^_^

WonderfuF poeM! MeaningfuL, toO. 5/5

LUZAn