Comments : Morning's Song

  • 16 years ago

    by Laura

    The words chosen combined wit the vivid imagery of a beautiful morning was enchanting. Creating peacefulness all around me while i read..great write!

  • 16 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    Oh, this was beautiful. The images expressed were lovely. Though not everything was perfect (e.g. unmade, messy beds), this poem was still leaking with positivity, as if happiness was floating around the settings in the poem.

    I loved it. Great job.