Wow...Do u know what i liked most..about this poem.. its comes from the heart and goes through the heart..

Very interesting poem. Wording could be better but this piece is greatly written. Topic is excellent.
-in your game you were always the master I was the fool
will starting from tonight your a part of my past
a forgotten dead memory that shall never last-
^these are my favorite lines. Keep up, 5/5

Great poem! The fact that you've moved on is the best, don't let him destroy you! I see so many of my friends struggle to move on, it's awesome that you have! Like everything else you've written, 5/5

This is a great poem, definately used good expressions. well done!

Nazeer