Yea sometimes I wish I had to cloud to float away on, just to get away.I really liked your poem.The flow was nearly flawless and all in all a great poem.5/5^-^

<3Amber

I liked it its short an cute

WOW. that was great. i love how creative and full of emotion your poems are. well done.

How much i wish i was a cloud, i could just live and be free.
But this poem was so good, it made me smile, and i loved the simplicity.
love Tara-Kay
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This line needs corrected: or a thought in you head
you head? It's your head. I grew up with 2 teachers one of them being a grammar and reading teacher so it kind of sticks. I'm the kind of person that reads books and writes down the page numbers where there are errors. I give you a five. Consistant rhyming. Reminds me of airpanes. I just got back from Ecuador so it reminds me of watching the land and the see underneath me as we fly through the clouds.

This is beautiful and I noticed all of your poems have very beautiful names as well. thank for commenting mine. I'm going to go do a few more of your, i really enjoyed this. It would be nicwe to return the favour but not necessary.

5/5

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Lol. i want to float away on a cloud. i loved it, it was awesome. 5/5

I liked the way your poem made me feel - a great write! Thanks for sharing :) Tara

This is cute! i love it! clouds rock

The rhymes seem so forced. I think this would be better if you wrote it in free verse. It doesn't always have to rhyme. But I think that the message of this poem was enough to score it a 5/5 from me.