A deliciously colorful write, nature in all its beauty, well done.

This was a very unique write. I like how you mentioned different colours, and expressed how they relate to some object of nature.

I noticed that sometimes you don't capitalise at the start of a sentence. I suggest doing so, as it makes your work look a lot more neater.

A wonderful poem to read.

My kind of poem

I love to write and read poems about nature,
space and time and with questions it is even
better making the readers think that much more.

I really enjoyed reading this mind-expanding poem.
An excellent read indeed with great rhyme and flow
a job well done and Write On,
Bogie

Thats such a beautiful heartwarming poem,well penned.