Wow this is really good you got all your emotion out on this and i could feel it great job keep it up!!!

laura

Hehe your word choice actually kinda made me laugh at some points.
but with that said..it's a great poem! you expressed your emotions effectively.
good work! keep it up! =]
(oh and i hope you and that guy worked out)
--Viola

I don't know what to say on this one.. honestly i'm laughing while reading this one coz i can somehow relate unto this. and can't help not to picture out the situation.

Back to the poem, well you honestly captured my heart though not considered to be a most heartwarming poem i've read. nice idea i like it! so unique...