I love it. It's beautiful and I can relate to it.

I really love deeply you
The only i can cherish in my whole world through
Ill surrender my life just to be with you
And protect you with all my strength i will be your armor

I love these lines. Great work!

Thank you...

"My Dearest You
The one and only
Please listen ill tell you a secret
I'd been loved you since the first day i saw you
And i promise my dearest love
You will be the one and only through my whole life..."

Just beautiful. I could relate to the whole poem especially that last stanza... beautiful
5/5
*Gem*

This is a beautifully worded poem. I luurve it!
Its sweet. those who have been in love will undoubtedly be able to relate. A stunning writer. Keep on writing.
(If ya feel like checking out mine anytime feel free!)
Lotsalove Kat-x-

Ty

This was an amazing poem so beaitiful, well worded. keep on writing you have a great style

Wow thank you for the comments ha!!!

Very nice! i can relate to this its beautifuly written!

5/5

This poem.. its comes from the heart and goes through the heart..

Hi Dian,
I like the way you express your love in the poem.

"The greatest melody from my heart that sang
With your lovely voice that making life"
Is very inspiring.