Comments : Bare

  • 16 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    I liked it. It was short and simple, but actually a little bit more complicated than it let on at first. then ending couplet added a bit more dimension to the poem.

    I've never heard of perfection being blind, but love being blind, and making people seem perfect when you love them is something that happens when you're blinded by love, so that's sort of what I assumed you were saying there.

    Meh, what a shitty comment. I'm going to go try a different poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    That was simple, sweet, and sad all at the same time!
    Charisma*