Comments : Baby Jordan

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    What a sad gut wrenching piece. This write hits you right in the heart. teh emotions are very strong.
    Keep writing
    Take care
    Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel

    Wow! that poem was amazing! it had a lot of heart and soul put into it! ur a really great poet!!

    Rachel

  • 16 years ago

    by Mack Bopape

    How can real a man with soul and heart do such a thing to a child who cant even speak "A". The world is real in hell. i like that line 'Life tym sentence is not a poetic justice' yeah those people deserved to be burnt alive.