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U R REALLY GOOD THAT POEM WAS REALLY GOOD

Wow i love that poem so well written love it keep writin so much emotion and described so well :) love it 5/5 xx

This was really good, i extremely liked it.
the flow and rhythm were practically flawless.
amazing for your first poem on here!
5/5

~Sandra

Perfect words to express ur pain!!!
Greatly penned.

God bless u

This was great.
sad subject, but wonderfully written.
5/5

Original idea. I liked it cause its different from stuff i usually read here. Love how the emotions are portrayed. Good job. 5/5
~ Lainey