Amazing poem

Wow, great poem! really powerful! 5/5 just WOW

Eeeek. Great poem! It got straight to the point, which I don't usually like so much, but the way you did it wasn't too bad.

Corrections:
[There {haven't been} seen as quiet night for years.
But She got all she wanted.
No emotions in her face will ever {appeare} again. ]
{haven't} should be {hasn't}
{appeare} should be {appear}

The flow was ok, not great, but not horrible. Again, I wanted to know what this girl was thinking and why she did what she did. Since we don't know what happened in her life, we can only guess at what's happening. Good write. =) 4/5 xoxo

Samantha

Wow that was kinda happy ina weird way.

This was soo good to read, great and moving stuff!!!
5/5
- ali x x x