It'd be like living in a dream;
A beautiful vision.
We'd share the same philosophy,
There'd be no division!

There is alot of truth in this poem. If you look back on our history and in the present right now, so many people are dying in the name of religion. Everybody should be entitled to believe in what they want to believe in. But it doesnt seem like thats going to happen any time soon. Religion, what we believe in, our values and attitudes are all what make us different. It seems we are fighting to make everybody look at life the same way as the next person. A wonderfully written poem, your pen has let you expose the truth.

This poem is different but very good. I liked it a lot. Keep up the good work 5/5

I have to agree with Makaveil. This poem is just one of the most best poems in the world!;in my opinion. Amazing write I would have to say my favorite stanza's where these two below.

Religion doesn't start a war,
Opinion stokes that fire.
Intolerance for one's beliefs,
Makes the flames grow higher.

It doesn't matter what you think,
You have the right to choose.
But if you take my right from me,
Then everyone will lose.

They just seemed to pop out of the screen to me. I really liked the rhythming and the way you used your words. You used vast majority of writing...Like complete etc....Amazing work!! Keep it up. Loads Of Love From Roxy.

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Okay. what could i possibly say that would sum up how i feel about this poem? nothing. this is frikken amazing...i don't even know what to say. the power emotion and depth in this piece was beautiful. this poem produced some very provoking thoughts for me. i just loved this. i can't even get over it..wow.

Unique good poem