I love it no other words just a beautiful poem :P

Not my favorite but very good poem..always Manda

You look p in the sky [up]
The starts shine so brightly [star]

Other then those two small mistakes I loved it ~The imagery just takes you to that place ~ Keep up the great work ~

Captured Beatifully:D.

I thought I was sitting there watching it myself!
Truly a magical write.
So Rose.. What did you wish for?;)

Well done,
Elaine.

Beautifully written, very sweet.
You should make one correction ( you have small typing error) the word "suck" in the tenth line should be "such". The line -You think you may see mars.- is somehow out of flow, but the rest of the poem is really good.
Keep up!