Very deep i think, i may know what you're trying to say here...

Oh my... that is so cute. It is almost a nursery rhym (sry cannot spell tonight) for little children.

Elegent yet simple. Absolutley brilliant!

--Sher

Nice job! I can read so much into this one.

Awesomely penned. The flow
is perfect. [: I love this piece!

Beautiful poem
your captured the uncertainty and confusion about growing up & the not nowing what you'll do.
5/5!

Loved the poem...