I guess it kind of goes with the title in a way. but it was very well written, and painted a picture in m head! 5/5

Wow amazing 5/5 keep it up!

* $heila *

Very well written..i flowed nicely but i give this one a 4/5..it wasnt your best in my opinion.

Very good
rhyming was great
i loved how everything great seemed like you couldnt reach it
so nice work i loved it
5/5
kaila