Andrew
Awesome piece. The emotions are very deep and intense. Love the chours.

Excellent!
Take Care Cindy

Nice song in poetic form. good word choice and rythm. Keep up the good work

This is amazing. When I was reading it I could feel the emotion but what I thought was ever cooler was that I could feel the beat and just hear music. It was intense but in a good way. Completely flawless.
5/5

Wow. the chorus is simply amazing. the words you use is completely awesome. 5/5