Why do the churning waters
Of an angry yet calm sea
Never cease to function
With actions of an anguish
Whose beauty is astounding

These lines are really catching and wriiten well. The word choice is great and I loved how the lexis strung each other. You kept it really beautiful. Take my 5/5 :)

Fsams

Another good poem....your writing is very different from others...and you should be proud..great job!

Ok well the big words were almost to much for this poem
i don't want to sound like I didn't get it but I think it needs to be more simple
just my suggestion
4/5
kaila

Big words? ...