A good poem, i like how u outlined it as a suicide note with a blank line...very creative.

i wrote a poem in a similiar to this earlier,

"memoirs of a suicide" u should view it

i think it has a lot in common with your poem

Life sucks

Hey wait,
if it's just a poem then nice poem 5/5. if not then i will not forgive you if you really mean it. seriously if you are thinking of something stupid to do i am not forgive you so don't do it.

Hey Haii this is a very sad poem, I love/hate the emotion, I love this the way it is a poem but i hate this coz your feeling sad , Haii dont say goodbye

your angel
gene Ross

Great poem
you did a great job
really sad though
and well i like how you sad
not to cry that you were just a little girl
i found it kinda contradicting everyone always cries when a little girl is hurt or sad
well great poem
and this better not be the last good bye or i shall be very upset with you
for not saying bye to me personnaly:(

Wow a deeply inspiring piece 5/5 a deep, deep meaning

xD
~NinjaGirl~

Oh my god, this almost made me cry. This is super sad. I loved it though. It's full of emotion. Great job. 5/5

<mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

I love this so much and it is really sad i hope it isnt your real goodbye cause you MUST tell your loved one/s first and prepare them or let them help
but all together great!!!!