Hang in there, ull get through it trust me ;). Jst take each day as it comes and u know what I realised and someone soo close to me once told me?? Life isnt about accepting the truth and its high expectations/standards its what u make it or perceive it. Good Job : ).

Luv Fay

I don't know about this one...I mean it was good but the flow was off and your abbrevate alot of your words...You should really try to fix that..

Overall 4/5

The flow was off in some parts and the rymhing was kind of simple but excellent poem none-the-less.I give it a 5/5.
Keep writing,
Miranda

I agree with the others. The flow could have been better
But still a great poem. ^^
Keep it up!
-C.P.-