hey anyone who reads this please write comments of all kinds i would really love some feedback on my writing..thanks
jamie

hi jamie...your writing is really good...i think you have amazing talent and keep it upo. pop by and check some of mine out sometime...id like to see your opinion of them...im just a starter but hey u gotta start somewhere...also did this ever happen?

This poem is amazing i like it i can relate yester day i watched my bestfriend die.