Omg !!!! this poem i can relate to it sooooo much great job keep it up great write!

laura

This poem really grabs you. u can tell it comes from the heart! i really liked the neding keep up the good work 5/5

O god no!! seriously.. im going though the exact same thing.. you can even read my middle two poems.. but wow this was soo good, and you really expressed your feelings well.. really cute :)

That was cruel of what he has done to you! Who does he think he is? You should let him be, he doesn't deserve you. Nice poem. Luv it. 5/5

>.> I hate men cheating on women.

You broke my heart in so many pieces
` You mean "into" so many pieces .

I've tried to talk to you about what happen,
`What happened .

Hm . There's something about this poem that gets you in the beginning, but then it kind of loses its charm in the end . I don't know why . It was somewhat cliche, but it was still nicely written (:

..__MiNDYY

It is a great poem. I could really tell that every word you said came from your heart. And i have been there and done it. Its hard i know. Keep it up you are really goood.

Omg, did you read my diary?? Lol, I'm going through this right now, well besides the third stanza.

This poem was wonderfully written. Great choice of words. I can see from the above posts that many people can relate to this and I sure can. The flow in this is flawless and it's well put together.
5/5

-Shannon <3

I like these types of poems
well done

You did a really great job on this poem. It flows very nicely and goes together well, but above all, I think most girls can actually RELATE to it! Keep it up.

Oh wow. Great poem. It can so relate to anyone and everyone. The flow was really good and great use of words. SO much emotion in this. Well done on this piece!

This was amazing. I LOVED IT!

Congrats on a job well done! Keep up the good work. ;)

~Lindz
A.k.a- In Love Gurl