Wow...i love it and can relate...5/5 please keep writing

Wow...that was really deep you did an amazing job on this : )

We had a taste of heaven,
We touched heaven,
We stretched for heaven and got there as one,

^i LOVE those lines. this poem has such deep emotions in it..and i could really feel your pain while reading it. break up are hard..and you portayed that hurt in this poem very well. it was well penned. and you had some beautiful imigary in it. great wrok! =] keep it up
and Stay Strong hunn.
--Viola

Too long but i love to read it ^_^ 5/5

This is me right now literally, I feel this exact way. You just describe all the things I will do without the girl, and how it will be without the girl. Good poem.

LOVE IT!!!

This is a really good poem i really liked it. Long but still good keep up the good work...

I love this poem so much. you've just describe what i feel right now. i even shed a tear while reading it. great poem..keep it up :)