Comments : Walking Through A Tainted Veil

  • 16 years ago

    by Rose not your average

    Screaming in a pitch black room,
    No one can hear my grief.
    Sheltered inside my own mind,
    Full of disregard and disbelief.

    that was my favorite stanza!
    nicly done this was a very good poem! keep up the good work. it had a pretty good flow! nice ending

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr M

    I've been here

    "Nothing I do will ever please anyone,
    Nothing I do, I do right. "

    A nice poem.