Do u know what i liked most..about this poem.. its comes from the heart and goes through the heart..

^^^ very much what they said...
my favorite part--

s this world falling down?
Or is it just being ripped from underneath me
Cant lift my head high
When I hate everything that lies within me
Just hold me tight and don't let my pain
Seep through my cracks

so deep and beatiful.. whole poem is nicley written .. good job
<3ang