Comments : Unspoken

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    How very sad and heart wrenching. The imagery is great as are the word choices.

    The sorrow sweeps across my heart
    Feeling the breeze of pain
    Tearing me apart and leaving me dead

    These lines really touched me.
    Take care Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Pamela G

    I like it, specially sad poems.