This is really sweet its beautiful and sincere i love it it nicely written i need to burn a mixed cd for my babe but good job keep it up

"All the chords pour out your soul
Every chorus speaks your mind
It is the soundtrack of my heart
From each note to every rhyme."

^Wonderful stanza. I liked the idea of a seeming connection between an object (CD) and person (lover). It did appeal to me.

"And now I'm burning one for you
So you can feel the same about me."

^Fascinating. The metaphor of burning a CD to portray the smoldering passion within the subject captivated my senses.

You've written this piece nicely on the whole. Certain lines need tightening-up, in order to augment the flow; whereas, it's not really a big deal anyway. Nice one, nevertheless. :) Keep it up!

Take care,
Marian

Oooo wonderfully written from the rhymes to the rhythm. This is deffinatley a different poem and im glad to read something different!!! My favortie stanza is:
I'mm finding a sudden comfort
In someone else's voice
It's like you're speaking through another
With this rhythmic noise.

WOW i like this one... really a good and brilliant poem... keep up...

Awww....the ending was really really good and unexpected. I loved it from beginning to end, the flow, the rhyme, the wording. It's all brilliant. Loved every bit...!
*ME*