Comments : Tension by:Travis Gruber

  • 16 years ago

    by geeeeee

    "We must slow down and help fix our mutual problems,
    If we cannot, a doomed existence our fate becomes."

    This poem has sparked an idea, wouldnt it be great if we could turn back time and edit every mistake of human kind, then reality kicks in and I think even if we could turn back we would probably do the same things all over again. There is still hope for the future, its in our hands. A great write, thought provoking too.