I liked the end of the poem last line I know i must 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

I like your poem in totality. The structure is very beautiful and I like the word choice. You keep your poems well written and I like your poems :)

5/5 all the way

Tc
Fsams

A feeling that most of us feel at a moment in our life, and that mean its not life, but the ppl sharing it, who make the life hard for each other.

keep it up

It is good but it isn't excellent. I like the topic but you could to describe emotions better and this piece should be deeper.