Hmm good BUT... Take out the funny attempts maybe keep a few like the stepping on his feet, but also write about your deeper feelings and add it to a love poem thread

Thats really good . keep up the good work =]

Kool poem, was going to write awesome but i write it on everyone and urs was really awesome lol lots of good poems, keep up the good work

It was good i can relate kinda

I love it. it is so sweet and funny at the same time and i dont think if he cheated on u. u would probaly do more than kick him in the knee...lol