Wow great life poem I love the flow, Nice piece, keep the good work

just a little question do you mean you/ on the yoyu/

by the way over all great job 5/5

Gene Ross

Omg ur a bloody fantasic poem writer i love ur work<3 it rox
peace out
~Taz~

The simplicity of each words really jives the poems and it was really nice, even the flow. nice poem and nice message.

The simplicity of each words really jives the poems and it was really nice, even the flow. nice poem and nice message.

Very good i love it

Being honest i aint seen a poem format like that before, but it worked really well... inspiration to me...

tops marks 5 / 5 spot on mate!

Wow! an amzing piece of poetry 5/5

"Hope is a ray
Which makes dreams come true
all yoyu gotta do is follow through."

so true!

xD
~NinjaGirl~