Wow great piece a sad one , ilove the idea and the flow I feel the emotion through it well penned poem keep it up

Gene Ross

I really liked the beginning, but mid way through the poem the structure started to fall apart.
The poem has a lot of emotion and was portrayed well.

I dont agree with XxX Synthetic Tears Run DryXxX. I was really pleased with it. It had a lot of feeling in it. Overall I think that it is a great poem. 5/5

Kalee