Hey

I like this poem. I get the feeling of desperation so intense that its almost frightening and a hint of paranoia.

"Deceitful eyes watch my every move,"

Well thats how i read it anyway lol.

I like your poems, they are real and honest, if you know what i mean? They are not all flowery and sweet, they are just there like life.

Great work

Kelly
xx

Really good...i loved it....keep it up