You know my words....i love it.....of course
i wish........
i wish alot of things i wish that you didn't feel so pressured to make the decisions in your life. but the decisions we make are the thigs that make us who we are. life will be full of hard choices to make right or wrong

laura

Ok again same problem with the alst you have a great talent but you need to find your own format for your poems.. anyways another 4/5

This is much better now... now all you need to do is improve it every time you write a new poem improve the structure and make it your own... never copy anyone elses structure jsut do your own if i could vote again i would give it a 5/5

I love this one too.
You are such a great writer.
Im jealous.

WOW! your can write and it's really deep i love it!!!! soooooooooo much you should comment my poems!

Wow how long has it been since you have last read this? Its been forever ....i remember when we wrote this...=[...=]
well if i could vote again i would give it a 5/5 =]

~laura~

Wait it did let me vote again!!!! whooo!!!! i am gonna try again!!!!