This was really a greatly written sad poem, you have put alot of emotion in it, you are truly a great writer.

Wow! this is wonderful.
you have expressed the battle between your head and your heart very well. and the pain of letting go..
a very touching and emotional poem.
truly amazing!
keep up the great work hunn.
--Viola

This was great!
Full emotions, pain and strength.
It's a difficult choice to have to choose between your heart and your head.
Very touching.
Loved reading it.
Take care

Very well done! Amazing that you can write so deeply at such a tender age - its going to serve you well throughout life.

Loved the 3 lines to a stanza and the different rhyming technique.

Mo

Aw great poem! It reminds me of something I just went through. You put all that emotion into words! Great job!
Like Mo, I liked the three lines to a stanze and the rhyming. It was original and very nicely done! Keep it up!

~Morgan~

Nice poem i love to read it ^_^ 5/5

The rhyming in this piece is good but the flow is little off in some parts. You could use some more metaphors for your emotions. I don't want to offend you in any way, just giving constructive critic.
Anyway, the poem is nicely written, I like its form and the whole idea.

Oh wow!
i wrote a poem that has the same purpose
but yours is so much better!
check it out if youd like
its called
A Graceful Swan
thanks :)