This was truly a greatly written poem as it made me cry remembering my past days,
you have done a great job and a 5/5 from me as you really deserve it.

keep up the great work cause you are so great.

I personaly believe that you can do better, this one has an inconsistent flow due to some long syllabic lines. And the fisrt stanza seems little forced and the grammar also sounds odd. You can make it better 4/5

tc