Aww that is really sweet and sad......
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Wow, I am sorry for your loss.
But your poem, was beautiful.
Your emotions were overwhelming, and although there wasn't a consistant flow, it didn't to much affect the peice.
Great job!
5/5
XxAmberxX

Oh my god
iam truly sorry about ur loss, even though i don't know or god forbid have not experianced such a thing, but in this heart felt words of yours, i can see and feel it...
i sincerly hope to god that u would never go through anything similar.............
ur poem was great, truly great....
take good care

How sad it is sir , it makes me cry... I feel the feeling of a great sadness her, as you always did for all of your poems, I love this very well penned and really sad... 5/5

Gene ross

Awwww hun i'm so sorry! that must've been horrible to go through. it was a beautiful poem if it makes you feel any better, i loved it, like always. beautiful.

Don't know what words to put in here to describe this one.it was very well written and it was really sad.And so sorry about what happen to your sister.

Oh HUN!!!!!!! i wished i had meet her :( all i can say is that she would have been so proud to have a brother like you wallah ur the sweeties out there. Yes she is an angel now looking down at you n smiling. dash xosh the poem was great brought a little tear to my eyes.

Wow...That was deep..and very sad...but written so beautifully...

I'm sorry for your loss ...

5/5...

I'm so sorry to hear about your sister, that's so sad. I have two older brothers, I'm the only girl...I know that bond between sister and older brother...I hope things get better for you.

That was my favorit 3 lines, they were put together so amazing! this poem is so sad! but has a some good rymes nice flow and shows so much emotion 5/5

This poem is a special one, Goran. How sad. You've portrayed your feelings quite well in just a few words. That's a gift. And I believe you are aware of such inborn talent.

You have my condolence for your loss. I hope you all the best and take care.

Marian

You know? I've read some of your other poems but I think out of all of them, this one's the best because it expresses an emotion not many have felt. You used a painful loss as a gain and I want to say this has to be one of the best poems I've had the pleasure of reading on this website. You put your heart into it, you knew what you were talking about, but most importantly, you weren't writing for the reader. You were writing for yourself and that's not something you see everyday. This is truely a work of art and I mean that from the bottom of soul.

Goran, this is a truly sad write, yet beautiful. This is the type of poem that can bring anyone to tears. I've never lost a sibling, so I can't say I can relate to this. But I do know how hard it is to deal with such great loss. Never stop writing and keep strong. =] Take care.

` Liz =]

That is such a sad yet beautifully written
peace
and the point of poetry is to
let your feelings go
and you did just that

and you came out with
this great write
nice job

and i agree

never stop writing

5/5

Sorry because I cannot write anything now, I cannot control my tears.

I am deeply sorry for your loss. i loved the poem. on how each word meant something so true, it was honestly amazing and so sweet but sad. she will always live in your heart. i am not crying, i'm not crying. ok i am but it was so sad. the emotions that came through your words were so strong. a def 5/5 from me. and a hug.

Goran, what a poems you penned here, Beautiful sad yet well express emotions.... sorry for your lost... i feel the same with you, i lost my sister last year also one of member P&Q.

well tribute to your sister.....

I know how hard it is for you to lose someone really close to you. I've lost people that were close to me like brother and sister. If you ever need something I will listen.

5/5
Very heartfelt;
& very emotional.

Made me cry even harder then what I was before I read this poem.

<3

That is so touching that I even started to cry, and I don't even know you or your family.

Aww.
i felt your pain.
im so sorry.
i liked this poem though.
very sad.
xxx.