Very nice and the content is cohesive to the caption. Good piece..just corret typo in line4. Tc

Andrew
Very sad piece you have penned.

laying awake while we're stuck in our beds
still wishing to dream of sweet solitude
but only thoughts of the past remain in our heads

These lines really touched me.
Excellent!
Take Care Cindy

I liked the structure for this. And I loooooove the concept. Once again your rhymes have been done very effortlessly. I love it.
5/5