Comments : Fake Love.

  • 16 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Great poem...I loved the repetition.

  • 16 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Um.. I just wanted to add to my previous comment 'cause I was in a rush when I wrote it so I didn't say all I wanted to.

    I like the topic of fake love because I'm sure most people have experienced it. You described fake love so well in this poem and I loved how it was more about realizes it was fake then it just being focused on the pain that comes after realizes it was fake because most poets focus on heartache instead of fake love being an eyeopener.

    So yeah, I think I've written enough =)
    Take care and don't stop writing, your very good & I don't know why in your profile it says you suck at writing poems because it is clear that you don't.