Beautiful poem.
Emotional and true.
Very good discription of anoraxia.
Great flow, rhyming and word choice.
Very well written.
Take care

Oh your topic was so current and your words were so suitable and advanced for this wonderful masterpiece..You described things about anorexia so well

My fave lines are;

Your skin is bruised, lanugo grows
You're so cold, you hide behind cloths.
You are so much pain yet cannot stop,
You keep falling. Drop. Drop.

Keep it up,
Laura

Wow...amazing poem, it really is such an issue now a days...i admit that i almost resorted to this but i realized that there are better ways to make yourself feel better....fantastic job!

Brooke<3

Oh how i loved this...This is beautifully written and every line is filled with so much truth...Sadly i can relate. you did a wonderful job on this piece.

OMG!... this is an amazing piece...

really hits the mark... such a beautifully written poem

really gets to the point..

great job

5/5

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