"O how i now see the world for what it is"

The world could only disguise its many tradgedies for so long, before they were all exposed. One of my favourite sayings by 2Pac is "Reality is wrong, dreams are for real" That pretty much sums it all up. Reality is something that we cant escape, but it sure as hell is wrong. This was an absolutely spectacular poem, filled with such emotion and truth! Never be blinded by the lies of society.

Hey hun...
yea of course ill read them... this poem is gd ur putting across to ppl how the true world is....

well written could u return the favour and comment on mine thanks

Differen! But I like enjoyed it. Especially love the use of repetition to convey your point, I also like the use of imagery, painting a vivid picture for your reader. Great Job

Great poem.
It's true.
Loved reading it.
Take care

Great job of expressing yourself!! 5/5

Yeah i'll comment some of ur pomes

is very good everything u say is ture
5/5

This is a good poem. it is about time people saw the world for what is really is, a place full of hate, hurt and pain. it is about time people started to do what they can to improve the world.

This is an amazing poem. 5/5

Kalee

It's an AMAZING POEM!!
IT really makes one think. It is so true, and sad how the world has become. I Pray that it will get better some day.